Dale,

BRAVO! Great shot of Emily. B&W photos are great. Let's discuss why you're not happy with this photo. I can post some information that I've read recently about ISO speed, grain, and sharpness. Give us the details about the photo data from properties if you can. To me this photo looks great but megapixel size is just part of the story. I really like the sun on her left cheek while the rest of her face is in shade. Also the background is blurry which enhances the portrait. Good job!

Best,
Warren